Răspuns:
My name is Valeria and i am 12 years old, in my free time i like doing different activities such as drawing, but my favorite one is dance , i really enjoy this hobby for several reasons:
First of all, it is a good way to pass the time, it is something to concentrate on and look forward to every day. Dancing also comes with the socializing aspect so that i can meet new people and enjoy new experiences every time.
Secondly, it helps me be present in the moment and not think about the future, dancing helps me concentrate and clear my head of pointless thoughts about what might happen.
Moreover, this hobby can develop in a future career so it is something that , with time and a bit of luck, can transform into a full time passion.
In conclusion, i may say that dancing is a hobby for escaping the stress from day to day life and it might even bloom into something you can make a living out of.
Explicație:
idei :
-primul paragraf(first of all) : dansul este bun pentru socializare si este ceva ce iti poate da experiente noi
-al doilea paragraf: este o metoda buna de a scapa de stresul de zi cu zi
-al treilea paragraf : posibilitatea unei cariere de dans
-al patrulea : concluzia ca dansul este o posibila cariera si ca ajuta la relaxare
