Este corect cum am făcut această compunere?our parents went home and .. they said that we would go the next day at sea and we were very happy! .... The next day, we went to the road. It was a pretty trip but we were preoccupied with listening to music, singing or telling funny happenings. When we arrived, the first thing we did was go to the beach. We played in the sand, we tanned and stuck in the sea. It was a great day ... I hope the next day will be even more exciting than this!

Our parents came home and ... they said that we would go the next day at sea and we were very happy! ... The next day, I walked the road. It was a pleasant trip, but I was concerned about listening to music, singing or telling funny happenings. When we arrived, the first thing we did was go to the beach. I played in the sand, sun tan and swim in the sea. It was a wonderful day ... I hope the next day will be even more interesting than that!